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Broken Angel

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« on: May 15, 2005, 10:59:31 am »
falling from darkness
reaching out to break the fall
grabbing for something that isnt there
missing pieces of reality
lost from my mind
lost from my soul
looking for the light
but only to get blinded by its brilliance
cowering in the corner of my world
knowing the light cannot be touched
its the unreachable dream
the screaming voices inside my head
telling me i should turn back
the dark is where i belong
not able to grasp sanity
just following the hidden path
walking among the shadows of uncertainty
waiting for my turn
the feelings of mourning
the morbid smell of death
the ending to it all
finally getting what i deserve
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« Reply #1 on: May 16, 2005, 05:52:46 pm »
Oooh, I like it a lot!!! :grin I can comepletely relate to this piece. It perfectly describes how I felt when I transitioned from my childhood to being an adult. Keep up the amazing work!!!!
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« Reply #2 on: May 17, 2005, 02:05:12 am »
ty sweetheart  :kiss
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« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2007, 01:35:51 pm »
Very wonderful Broken  :)
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« Reply #4 on: March 19, 2007, 01:19:17 am »
ty very much...been quite some time since i wrote that piece....i lost my inspiration i guess
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« Reply #5 on: December 14, 2009, 04:06:00 am »
I like it ,you really brought the darkness and uncertainty.
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